The Green Submarine
Captain Kim dived down deep into the ocean,
in her green submarine called ‘The Gherkin in Motion’.
Weaving past whales with the help of Mate Stu,
who steered the sub like a foot guides a shoe.
The Gherkin sped on ‘til it reached the sea bed.
From a map in her lap, Captain Kim calmly read:
“At the Great Anchor, turn sharply north-west.”
Mate Stu said “Aye aye!” and pressed on with their quest.
Past anglerfish, tuna and even a shark,
they gunned for a tunnel disguised by the dark.
The sub reappeared in a shower of light,
as before them appeared a mythic delight.
The green submarine was a craft full of glee –
a glittering city submerged by the sea!
Their eyes bulged out wide like a great Praying Mantis.
Captain Kim and Mate Stu had discovered Atlantis!
in her green submarine called ‘The Gherkin in Motion’.
Weaving past whales with the help of Mate Stu,
who steered the sub like a foot guides a shoe.
The Gherkin sped on ‘til it reached the sea bed.
From a map in her lap, Captain Kim calmly read:
“At the Great Anchor, turn sharply north-west.”
Mate Stu said “Aye aye!” and pressed on with their quest.
Past anglerfish, tuna and even a shark,
they gunned for a tunnel disguised by the dark.
The sub reappeared in a shower of light,
as before them appeared a mythic delight.
The green submarine was a craft full of glee –
a glittering city submerged by the sea!
Their eyes bulged out wide like a great Praying Mantis.
Captain Kim and Mate Stu had discovered Atlantis!
This poem is copyright (©) Ian Brownlie 2026

About the Writer
Ian Brownlie
Ian lives with his family in Marlow, Bucks (UK). His prospective middle grade novel, Solomon Brown from Hero Town, was longlisted for the Times/Chicken House Children's Fiction Competition. His poems have been published in The Dirigible Balloon and The Toy.
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